Caving Destinations
does this sound right? 10 easy points!!!!!!!!?
how do i make this soiund right? 10 points to best answer (i think i should order the sentences a different way. can you help me?)
The Bahamas is a stunning place, and it’s the best vacation spot ever. You can find miles of beaches combined with caves and rainforest, hills and mountains, and you have never seen such an exciting sun set until you have seen it set over the Atlantic Ocean. The Bahamas is the number one vacation destination for everybody. The Bahamas is such a favorite vacation destination because of its beaches and entertainment.
this is actually only a piece of the paper i have 2 other short paragraphs
I think I would leave out “The Bahamas is the number one vacation destination for everybody”, and put the last sentence first but leave out the word “entertainment” since it isn’t mentioned after that.
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